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To whom it may concern:
I write to you regarding the feet.
They carry a heavy burden
and deserve your support
to cross the ground,
to toughen and callous against the street
to hold you up and set you down.
To the feet:
I write to you regarding the soldier you carry
He carries heavy orders
and deserves your support;
though you hold him up,
he holds you together
and holds together those who write this letter.
To the soldier:
I write to you regarding your mother
Who has a heavy heart
and deserves your support
since she brought you into the world
and waits for you to leave it
both of you alone, though she with her dog.
To the mother:
I write to you regarding your daughter
Who weighs a heavy mind
and deserves your support
as she grows and learns and graduates
and watches your dog
wait with you by the door.
To the daughter:
I write to you regarding the feet.
They carry a heavy burden
and deserve your support.
In their beautiful shoes,
they carry you as you run about
never slowing down.
I wish you would slow down.
©2009 ~cvsoul
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Just a little something I whipped up while waiting for a friend to finish her essay. It was one of those 20-minute freewrite deals that I am told is good enough to put up here, at least temporarily.

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This is a really fantastic work, Chris. =)

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The bad things in life opened my eyes to the good things I wasn't paying attention to before.

Legacy High School class of 09.

State Champion

Winter percussion 09
Winter guard 06, 07, 08
Marching band 06,07,08

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